Friday, November 23, 2007

mail और email


चिट्ठाजगत अधिकृत कड़ी

mail थी सुस्त
email है चुस्त
mail थी महंगी
email है मुफ़्त

email का सिलसिला हुआ शुरु
डाकिये का आना जाना हो गया बंद
पड़ोसी भी भेजने लगे email
और मेल-मिलाप का हो गया अंत

mail में कई बाधाएं थी
नाप तौल की सीमाएं थी
फिर भी साथ ले आते थे
छोटे लिफ़ाफ़ो में बहनों का गर्व
हर भैया दूज और राखी के पर्व

mail में कई बाधाएं थी
नाप तौल की सीमाएं थी
फिर भी साथ ले आते थे
होठों की लाली हल्दी के निशां
जो जता देते थे प्रेम कुछ लिखे बिना

mail में कई बाधाएं थी
नाप तौल की सीमाएं थी
फिर भी साथ ले आते थे
माँ के आंसूओं से मिटते अक्षर
जो अभी तक अंकित हैं दिल के अंदर

mail में कई बाधाएं थी
नाप तौल की सीमाएं थी
email में नहीं कोई रोक-टोक
बकबक करे या भेजे joke
पूरे करे आप अपने शौक

किस काम का ये बेलगाम विस्तार?
समाता नहीं जिसमें अपनों का प्यार
gigabyte का folder गया है भर
एक भी खत नहीं उसमें मगर
जो मुझको आश्वासित करे
न cc हो न bcc हो
मुझको बस सम्बोधित करे

आदमी या तो है आरामपरस्त
या फिर है कुछ इस कदर व्यस्त
कि थोक में बनाता पैगाम है
auto signature से करता प्रणाम हैं

सब है सुविधा के नशे में धुत्त
धीरे धीरे सब हो रहा है लुप्त

mail थी सुस्त
email है चुस्त
mail थी महंगी
email है मुफ़्त

सिएटल
23 नवम्बर 2007

इससे जुड़ीं अन्य प्रविष्ठियां भी पढ़ें


4 comments:

बाल किशन said...

बहुत अच्छा और तुलनात्मक अध्ययन किया आपने. लेकिन मुझे लगता है की दो त्रुटियां रह गई है. शायद टाईपिंग मिस्टेक है. देखें:-
email में कई बाधाएं थी (यंहा email की जगह mail होना चाहिए था)
नाप तौल की सीमाएं थी
फिर भी भर लाते थे
होठों की लाली हल्दी के निशां
जो जता देते थे प्रेम कुछ लिखे बिना

email में कई बाधाएं थी (यंहा email की जगह mail होना चाहिए था)
नाप तौल की सीमाएं थी
फिर भी भर लाते थे
छोटे लिफ़ाफ़ो में बहनों का गर्व
हर भैया दूज और राखी के पर्व

Shiv Kumar Mishra said...

कहीं से मुफ्त में मिली चीज
खर्च न करने की सुविधा जरूर देगी
लेकिन अपने इस एहसान की
कुछ न कुछ कीमत वसूल कर लेगी

फिर चाहे हो वह बहन का प्यार
अपनों के आंसू और माँ का दुलार,
संग में तीज या राखी का त्यौहार
साथ ये ख़त्म करे आत्मीयता अपार

अपनों से रिश्ते हमने बनाए सस्ते
ख़ुद ही जुदा कर लिए अपने ही रस्ते
दोष क्यों देखें कंप्यूटर और इ-मेल में
हम तो मात खा गए अपने ही खेल में

Anonymous said...

राहुल जी:

आपकी ये कविता पढ कर मुझे अपनें पसंदीदा George Carlin के ये Quotable Quotes याद आ गये । शायद कुछ लोगों ने पहले पढे होंगे लेकिन भेजने का लोभ संवरण नहीं कर पा रहा ।

अनूप भार्गव

-------------------------------------------------


A Message by George Carlin:

The paradox of our time in history is that we have
taller buildings but shorter tempers, wider Freeways,
but narrower viewpoints. We spend more, but have less,
we buy more, but enjoy less. We have bigger houses and
smaller families, more conveniences, but less time. We
have more degrees but less sense, more knowledge, but
less judgment, more experts, yet more problems, more
medicine, but less wellness.

We drink too much, smoke too much, spend too
recklessly, laugh too little, drive too fast, get too
angry, stay up too late, get up too tired, read too
little, watch TV too much, and pray too seldom.
We have multiplied our possessions, but reduced our
values. We talk too much, love too seldom, and hate
too often.

We've learned how to make a living, but not a life.
We've added years to life not life to years. We've
been all the way to the moon and back, but have
trouble crossing the street to meet a new neighbor. We
conquered outer space but not inner space. We've done
larger things, but not better things.

We've cleaned up the air, but polluted the soul. We've
conquered the atom, but not our prejudice. We write
more, but learn less. We plan more, but accomplish
less. We've learned to rush, but not to wait. We build
more computers to hold more information, to produce
more copies than ever, but we communicate less and
less.

These are the times of fast foods and slow digestion,
big men and small character, steep profits and shallow
relationships. These are the days of two incomes but
more divorce, fancier houses, but broken homes. These
are days of quick trips, disposable diapers, throwaway
morality, one night stands, overweight bodies, and
pills that do everything from cheer, to quiet, to
kill. It is a time when there is much in the showroom
window and nothing in the stockroom. A time when
technology can bring this letter to you, and a time
when you can choose either to share this insight, or
to just hit delete...

Remember; spend some time with your loved ones,
because they are not going to be around forever.

Remember, say a kind word to someone who looks up to
you in awe, because that little person soon will grow
up and leave your side.

Remember, to give a warm hug to the one next to you,
because that is the only treasure you can give with
your heart and it doesn't cost a cent.

Remember, to say, 'I love you' to your partner and
your loved ones, but most of all mean it. A kiss and
an embrace will mend hurt when it comes from deep
inside of you.

Remember to hold hands and cherish the moment for
someday that person will not be there again.

Give time to love, give time to speak! And give time
to share the precious thoughts in your mind.

AND ALWAYS REMEMBER:

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take,
but by the moments that take our breath away.


George Carlin

Anonymous said...

राहुल जी:

आपकी ये कविता पढ कर मुझे अपनें पसंदीदा George Carlin के ये Quotable Quotes याद आ गये । शायद कुछ लोगों ने पहले पढे होंगे लेकिन भेजने का लोभ संवरण नहीं कर पा रहा ।

अनूप भार्गव

The paradox of our time in history is that we have taller buildings but shorter tempers, wider Freeways, but narrower viewpoints. We spend more, but have less, we buy more, but enjoy less. We have bigger houses and smaller families, more conveniences, but less time. We have more degrees but less sense, more knowledge, but less judgment, more experts, yet more problems, more medicine, but less wellness.

We drink too much, smoke too much, spend too recklessly, laugh too little, drive too fast, get too angry, stay up too late, get up too tired, read too little, watch TV too much, and pray too seldom. We have multiplied our possessions, but reduced our values. We talk too much, love too seldom, and hate too often.

We've learned how to make a living, but not a life. We've added years to life not life to years. We've been all the way to the moon and back, but have trouble crossing the street to meet a new neighbor. We conquered outer space but not inner space. We've done larger things, but not better things.

We've cleaned up the air, but polluted the soul. We've conquered the atom, but not our prejudice. We write more, but learn less. We plan more, but accomplish less. We've learned to rush, but not to wait. We build more computers to hold more information, to produce more copies than ever, but we communicate less and less.

These are the times of fast foods and slow digestion, big men and small character, steep profits and shallow relationships. These are the days of two incomes but more divorce, fancier houses, but broken homes. These are days of quick trips, disposable diapers, throwaway morality, one night stands, overweight bodies, and pills that do everything from cheer, to quiet, to kill. It is a time when there is much in the showroom window and nothing in the stockroom. A time when technology can bring this letter to you, and a time when you can choose either to share this insight, or to just hit delete...

Remember; spend some time with your loved ones, because they are not going to be around forever.

Remember, say a kind word to someone who looks up to you in awe, because that little person soon will grow up and leave your side.

Remember, to give a warm hug to the one next to you, because that is the only treasure you can give with your heart and it doesn't cost a cent.

Remember, to say, 'I love you' to your partner and your loved ones, but most of all mean it. A kiss and an embrace will mend hurt when it comes from deep inside of you.

Remember to hold hands and cherish the moment for someday that person will not be there again.

Give time to love, give time to speak! And give time to share the precious thoughts in your mind.

AND ALWAYS REMEMBER:

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.